Hello. I think you should visit my home. It is a good place. I'm going to tell you about my home.
本論(自分のことを話す、必ず受け身も2文使うことを意識)
First, I will talk about my family. I have a brother, Taro. He is two years old. He is loved by 〜.
Second, I will talk about my soul food at my home. We often have fried rice (Cha-han) for Sunday lunch. Fried rice is made from rice, egg, oyster sauce and black pepper.
まとめ(共通)
Thank you for listening to my presentation. My home is good place to visit. Please visit my home.